General Poetry posted November 23, 2014


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A sonnet

Be Still

by Janet Foor


There's stillness in the evening's mellow sky
as wonder fills me with a quiet glow
it permeates my soul with each new sigh
like Juliet awaiting Romeo.

Across the meadow on a gentle breeze
the lingering fall leaves float gently down
without a sound they cover boundaries
and change the whole complexion of our town.

But as the still night settles on the land
and ghostly shadows creep into my mind
the far-off sounds of day become like sand
and tell my earthly worries to unwind.

Tonight I'll pray for those who cannot see
the beauty that is ours eternally.





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Last night, the stillness and beauty of the setting sun overwhelmed me, I was reminded of Psalm 46:10, "Be still and know that I am God. I will be exalted among the nations, I will be exalted in the earth."
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