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A Pantoum Sonnet

A chapter in the book Commentary and Philosophy

A Day by the Lake

by Treischel




There is no better way to spend a day.
I love to spend it here upon a lake,
While tucked away in fav'rite private bay,
With all its many pleasures to partake.

I love to spend it here upon a lake.
I'm ready when the weather fin'ly clears,
With all its many pleasures to partake,
Where Nature's sound is music to my ears.

I'm ready when the weather fin'ly clears,
When I might choose to take a quiet walk,
Where Nature's sound is music to my ears,
And I might spot an Eagle or a Hawk.

There is no better way to spend a day.
While tucked away in fav'rite private bay.





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Whether fishing, or stolling, boating, swiming, or just sitting by the lake, there are not many more delightful ways to spend a day.

This poem is a Pantoum Sonnet combining the formats of the Pantoum and the Sonnet. I missed the contest because it filled before I could submit mine, needing to review a bit to earn the money to enter. Oh well, I'll post it here anyway.

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