Shared Experience

by Treischel

Teach kids all things that you so love.
Shared passions gained will rise above
the insecurities there are
restricting them from going far,
by just exposing them to all the joy it brings.
This feeling will accrue when you teach kids all things.

They'll walk by you with smiling face,
Companionship you'll both embrace.
With pointers they can understand,
you let them practice their command
of complex processes you show them how to do.
For then, in eager confidence they'll walk by you.

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I love to take photographic pictures. Here my grandson has begun to share my passion. I've lent him one of my cameras.

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Meter: 8,8,8,8,12,12
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In each stanza the first 4 syllables (or 4 single syllable words)in the first line of the stanza must be repeated as the last 4 syllables in the last line. This creates the wrap effect, for which the format is named - Wrapped Refrain.

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