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A 5-7-5-7-7 Poem with Refrain
A chapter in the book Commentary and Philosophy
I Really Wonder
by Treischel
I Really Wonder
(A 5-7-5-7-7 Poem with Refrain) I wonder You ever notice how snow melts in Spring 'round bases of trees? They're the first to catch the heat with their limbs raised to the sky. I wonder Is it something else that causes this reaction coming from the earth? Heated life force of the tree, ready to burst forth with life? I wonder |
I was sitting having coffee and noticed this out my window. Then I drove around and found this to be the case everywhere.
The stanzas are written in a Tanka-like 5-7-5-7-7 format.
The photograph was taken by the author.
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