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Rondeau Redouble

A chapter in the book Commentary and Philosophy

Time's Pace

by Treischel

Time's Pace
(A Rondeau Redouble)



Does time really get faster as we age?
As we grow old it certainly seems so.
There isn't a precise measurement gage,
But seriously, I'd still like to know.

Kids dream of the changes they'll undergo.
Things feel like forever when you're teenage;
Just can't wait to grow, all things way too slow.
Does time really get faster as we age?

It goes so quickly as you turn each page.
Look back at what wasn't so long ago,
It seems you really flew through every stage.
As we grow old it certainly seems so.

Yesterday went at an amazing tempo,
Years flying by in a rapid rampage.
The tale that's marked by my wrinkled face show
There isn't a precise measurement gage.

The premise of time I've yet to assuage.
The pertinent pace of its current's flow
Must mock the very wisdom of a sage.
But seriously, I'd still like to know.
Does time really get faster?






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Or is it that we just have so many more memories stored that it seems faster?

This poem is a Rondeau Redouble.
A Rondeau Redouble is a poem with a very complex fixed format. It is written on two rhymes (the a and b rhymes), but in five stanzas of four lines each and one of five lines that repeats a portion of the first line of the poem. Each of the first four lines (which due to the a and b rhymes will be identified in the following stanzas as A1, B1, A2 and B2) get individually repeated in turn once in each of the following stanzas by becoming successively the respective fourth lines of stanzas 2, 3, 4, and 5; and the first part of the first line is repeated as a short fifth line to conclude the fifthth stanza. The stanzas each carry an abab rhyme scheme. So with the repeat lines shown in numbered capitals, this can be represented as -

A1,B1,A2,B2 - b,a,b,A1 - a,b,a,B1 - b,a,b,A2 - a,b,a,(A1). This poem can have any meter.

This on e is in pentameter.

This clock is one I have in my home's basement. Seems appropriate for retirement.
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