Commentary and Philosophy Poetry posted February 17, 2014 Chapters:  ...101 102 -103- 104... 


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ABAB Rhymed Poem

A chapter in the book Commentary and Philosophy

The Universe

by Treischel

The Universe
(ABAB Ryhmed Poem)




When I look upon stars
Whether planets, like Mars,
Or the billions of suns,
As the Universe runs,
I am filled with awe.
The conclusion I draw:
Too vast to comprehend.
I begin in the end
Feeling how really small
We are amidst it all.





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ABAB rhymed in 10 lines, Syllable count 6.

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