Commentary and Philosophy Poetry posted November 26, 2013 Chapters:  ...96 97 -98- 99... 


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Take Heed

by Treischel

Oh mothers and fathers , I pray you, take heed
Of the things that you would do.
As you hotly engage your physical need,
Remember a thing or two.

For your love designs may make another life,
As forces within ensue.
Be aware to avoid embryonic strife,
There's much you might put it through.

The seeds of life planted in a mother's womb
Are precious beyond belief.
Protected from harm, a cherished child will bloom,
Well nurtured in liquid sheaf.
It quickly grows under influence of mom,
Connected in coiled motif.
It's very important to keep feeling calm,
For the child can feel her grief,
And sense her joy, float in pain, know she's annoyed
And relax in her relief.
Whichever - the term is endured or enjoyed,
Determines a saint or thief.

A mother must watch what she puts in her mouth
Be it drugs, or smokes, or food.
'Cause whatever that baby's mother ingests
It impacts her infant's mood.
If you pay attention to a mother's health,
Good results will be accrued.
A fine new addition to the commonwealth
When child is finally viewed.

Oh mothers and fathers , I pray you, take heed
Of the things that you would do.
As you hotly engage your physical need,
Remember a thing or two.




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