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Quatrains

A chapter in the book Commentary and Philosophy

Sweet and Sour Sin

by Treischel

Sweet and Sour Sin
(Quatrains)





Sweet and sour taste of sin
Slowly churns the thoughts within.
As the battle with my conscience
Has resistance wearing thin.

While desire's pull is strong
I know what's right and what's wrong.
Know I should be so much better
When temptation comes along.

But alas, I was so feeble
Against this tempting evil,
Until I heard a church bell
Ringing loudly in the vale.

I asked the Lord to guide me
When standing right beside me
Was the presence of our Savior,
Cleansing evil thoughts inside me.

Praise the Lord!





Sin can be so tempting. We are not strong enough alone.

This poem is simple Quatrains with mixed 8/7 tempo, Rhyme scheme is: aaba

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