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A Susnika Poem - 2
A chapter in the book Animated Stills
Gogli-eyed Love
by Treischel
Gogli-eyed Love
(A Susnika Poem) What's this as I alight? Love, gogli-eyed! Churned up inside By the fireside. Maybe romance tonight? Why am I gogli-eyed? I'm at a loss, As my eyes cross, Then turn and toss. My love can't be denied! |
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Even insects find love.
This poem is a Susnika, two actually. A SUSNIKA exploring human emotions. It is a fusion form of Tanka and Nanni poems, just like an Acronet or Quonac but with a twist. A SUSNIKA is a five liner poem like a Tanka and with a 24 syllable count like a nanni, but with a twist (nassus1957 modified version) of the fixed syllable count of Tanka 5/7/5/7/7 into 6/4/4/4/6 syllable count instead. The first and last lines are rhymed but the remaining lines with 4 syllable count are unrhymed, although, I chose to rhyme them.
This picture is of a dragonfly that I photographed this weekend, 7/20/2013 at my campsite at Lake Elmo,
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and 2 member cents. This poem is a Susnika, two actually. A SUSNIKA exploring human emotions. It is a fusion form of Tanka and Nanni poems, just like an Acronet or Quonac but with a twist. A SUSNIKA is a five liner poem like a Tanka and with a 24 syllable count like a nanni, but with a twist (nassus1957 modified version) of the fixed syllable count of Tanka 5/7/5/7/7 into 6/4/4/4/6 syllable count instead. The first and last lines are rhymed but the remaining lines with 4 syllable count are unrhymed, although, I chose to rhyme them.
This picture is of a dragonfly that I photographed this weekend, 7/20/2013 at my campsite at Lake Elmo,
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