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An Ode to Water in Free Style
A chapter in the book Commentary and Philosophy
Oh, Water
by Treischel
Oh Water
(An Ode to Water in Free Style)) Oh, Water! Water in my body, Water in my soul, A crazy composition That keeps me whole. It drips, It rains, It splashes, It flows. I can put my tootsies in it And wiggle my toes When I get near water, It creates a soothing Calm, A Primal-like reaction, That becomes a soothing balm. Oh, water! I'm like a fish to water. It just seems A part of me. It is! Anywhere I saunter, Whether River, Lake, or Sea, It becomes a reality To me! Oh, Water! Water sets me free! I'll drink it! I'll swim it! I'll put a paddle in it! There simply is no limit To what water does for me! Oh, Water! Water in my body, Water in my soul, A crazy composition That keeps me whole. |
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Some free style thoughts on water and me.
Free Style has no for formal structure, but does carry rhyme.
The picture is a photograph taken by the author at Lake Phalen in St. Paul, Minnesota, near sunset. Unknown paddler.
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and 2 member cents. Free Style has no for formal structure, but does carry rhyme.
The picture is a photograph taken by the author at Lake Phalen in St. Paul, Minnesota, near sunset. Unknown paddler.
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