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a Hesitatelet Poem. See Notes.
A chapter in the book Commentary and Philosophy
Rumors
by Treischel
Rumors
(A Hesitatelet Poem) Rumors have a vicious bite. They sting! Where truth isn't always in sight. A fling! They often hurt. They're lies! They toss the dirt. She cries! So, if you're alert. It dies. Respect each person's dignity. Think first! We need a loving community. Not worst! So, don't prolong a rumor's life. Move on! They're like cutting with a knife. It's wrong! You can reduce the cause of strife. Be strong! Kill a rumor. Offer humor! |
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Just an Experiment in Style
This is a Hesitatelet poem, sponsored by Ritchie, 9999pool. I came across this while reviewing his poem, Mama's Last Words. Here's his notes.
This is a new form/style developed by 'Cookie333" called "Hesitatelet" with the following rules:
For every non-rhyming couplets of two (2) lines -
Line 1: A complete sentence, or multiple complete sentence combinations (noun/subject and verb or with adjective, if desired)
Line 2: A two-word statement expressing a motion or commotion (contractions are suitable and count only as one word. For example: I'm, it's) consists of a subject with a verb or adjective (two words total). The main essence is the hesitation of this 2nd line which allows readers to 'pause' and reflect - hence a 'hesitation' and the name 'Hesitatelet'.
So here's my first attempt at it.
This picture is one I took of my daughter using a kaleidoscope method.
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and 2 member cents. This is a Hesitatelet poem, sponsored by Ritchie, 9999pool. I came across this while reviewing his poem, Mama's Last Words. Here's his notes.
This is a new form/style developed by 'Cookie333" called "Hesitatelet" with the following rules:
For every non-rhyming couplets of two (2) lines -
Line 1: A complete sentence, or multiple complete sentence combinations (noun/subject and verb or with adjective, if desired)
Line 2: A two-word statement expressing a motion or commotion (contractions are suitable and count only as one word. For example: I'm, it's) consists of a subject with a verb or adjective (two words total). The main essence is the hesitation of this 2nd line which allows readers to 'pause' and reflect - hence a 'hesitation' and the name 'Hesitatelet'.
So here's my first attempt at it.
This picture is one I took of my daughter using a kaleidoscope method.
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