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Dying Thoughts

A chapter in the book Commentary and Philosophy

Death Bed

by Treischel



Death Bed


~<>~


I am on a lonely sea,

And fight the storm of death,

And only my thoughts can comfort me,

' Till I walk that Eternal Path.

*

I see my life go flying by,

A vision of my past.

I love, and laugh, and weep, and cry,

' Tis my life's first breath to last.

*

I rip, and tear, and analyze

To see where I've gone wrong.

For a man must know before he dies,

Exactly what he's done.

*

A twinkle appears within my eyes,

A smile upon my face.

For now I know that when man dies,

He finally finds his place.


~<>~





Just a Poem

I actually wrote this poem in 1963 but pulled it out recently and thought, not too bad. Thought someome might enjoy.
And,
Im still kicking around.

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