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A Lisalet Style Poem on Solitude of the Soul
A chapter in the book Commentary and Philosophy
Adrift to Dream
by Treischel
Adrift to Dream
Lift me into the painted sky To heights above the mountains high Adrift among billowing clouds Away from loud annoying crowds To heights above the mountains high Where legends live and eagles soar The dream my soul's been searching for Lift me into the painted sky Adrift among billowing clouds Where heaven's touch will set me free And guide me where I'm meant to be To heights above the mountains high Away from loud annoying crowds To meditate in solitude My fears released, then peace ensued Adrift among billowing clouds |
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This poem was inspired by my friend Ritchie (9999pool) who introduced me to this poem yesterday. As I was intrigued, I had to try it.
This poem is written in Lisalet Style. This is the new 'Lisalet Style/Format' Poem, developed by "L Sherman", a member of FanStory. I'm told I'm the third poet to try it.
This style has similarities with some other styles. The repetition in this poem is all based on the opening stanza. Each successive stanza starts with the corresponding line from the first. (Second stanza starts with 2nd line of first, so on...). Also, the final line of each stanza after the first one is the line directly preceding the repeated lines. Second stanza starts with 2nd line of first stanza and ends with the line immediately above the 2nd line in the first, and so on.
The line flow is like this: 1,2,3,4 - 2,5,6,1 - 3,7,8,2 - 4,9,10,3.
There is no line count or rhyme scheme specified.
For this poem I chose a count of 8 and a rhyme scheme fell out as: aabb abba abba abba
The photograph is one of mine.
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and 2 member cents. This poem is written in Lisalet Style. This is the new 'Lisalet Style/Format' Poem, developed by "L Sherman", a member of FanStory. I'm told I'm the third poet to try it.
This style has similarities with some other styles. The repetition in this poem is all based on the opening stanza. Each successive stanza starts with the corresponding line from the first. (Second stanza starts with 2nd line of first, so on...). Also, the final line of each stanza after the first one is the line directly preceding the repeated lines. Second stanza starts with 2nd line of first stanza and ends with the line immediately above the 2nd line in the first, and so on.
The line flow is like this: 1,2,3,4 - 2,5,6,1 - 3,7,8,2 - 4,9,10,3.
There is no line count or rhyme scheme specified.
For this poem I chose a count of 8 and a rhyme scheme fell out as: aabb abba abba abba
The photograph is one of mine.
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