Commentary and Philosophy Poetry posted December 24, 2012 Chapters: 3 4 -5- 6... 


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The Polar Nature of Christmas (Unraveling Interweave)

A chapter in the book Commentary and Philosophy

Counter Balanced Christmas

by Treischel

Counter Balanced Christmas


Presents are nice, Christ the Purpose
Heaven sent Hope, presents are nice
Christ the Purpose, Heaven sent Hope

Heaven sent Hope, Tree so pretty
People sing carols, Heaven sent Hope
Tree so pretty, People sing Carols

People sing carols, Christ the Purpose
Salvation's sent us, People sing carols
Christ the Purpose, Salvation's sent us

Salvation's sent us, tree so pretty
Angels sing praise, Salvation's sent us
Tree so pretty, Angels sing praise

Angels sing praise, season is jolly
People sing carols, Angels sing praise
Season is jolly, People sing carols

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People sing carols, Heaven sent hope
Salvation's sent us, tree so Pretty
Presents are nice, Christ the Purpose

Season is jolly
People sing carols
Tree so pretty
Presents are nice

Heaven sent Hope
Salvation's sent us
Angels sing Praise
Christ the Purpose

Jolly
People
Pretty
Presents

Hope
Salvation
Praise
Christ

Purpose




Merry Christmas to all

This is about the dichotomy in Christmas that pulls between Spiritual versus Commercial aspects.

I was experimenting with this format. I'd call it Intertwined Free Verse, or maybe basket weave verse. I unravel it at the end.

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