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A chapter in the book Commentary and Philosophy

The Creator's Mind

by Treischel



As I observe the world,
I can't help but see the magnificent patterns that God, the Creator, has woven throughout his amazing handiwork.
I think about the philosophical arguments we fools have,
on whether or not God created the world as stated in the Bible,
or whether it just evolved naturally
through some mystical chemical process that bubbled and boiled
a cosmic brew that eventually resulted in
US.


I find no contradiction in God's handiwork,
because I can see within His Mind a creation of instantly evolving thoughts
that simply evolved during the moment's time, as he started with simple things
and then
excitedly
allowed them to coalesce
and experimentally flow to more complex ones.
I'm sure glad He got off that
"udder" kick
before he got around to humans.



Now,
look around at mankind.
He created us in his image and likeness, and endowed us with abilities nothing else on earth has.
If we are made like him,
what is God's most noticeable characteristic?

HE IS THE CREATOR!

And,
I think that when He watches the feeble efforts of his maturing children,

He sits back and smiles.

So that got me inspired to write this:



The Creator's Mind (Nonet Poem)

*************

When God creates, There are no limits.
His touch creates, His Mind Explores.
He's the Master of Each Change.
Every single thing is new.
Great Diversity
In Everything
Mix Color,
Beauty,
Joy.

*

Now take a tree, There's no single type.
There are very many kinds about:
Pines, Oaks, Willows and Elms,
Just to name out a few,
And within the kind
No two are like.
They all have
Different
Shapes.

*

If that's not enough, Look at the Leaves,
Every one with the same purpose,
To capture daily sunshine.
But are they the same?
No! Hardly at all.
Each is unique.
They all have
Different
Colors.

*

Now, take a look at each separate leaf,
With similar shapes of the style.
Each cell and vein is unique
Compared to its neighbor,
When held together.
You clearly see
Not even two
Are the
Same.

*

Now, carry this to the world at large.
God's creation is ALL unique:
No animal, plant or stone,
Not even a snowflake,
Or a fingerprint,
Or tree, or Eye.
It's a real
Lovely
Thing.

*

It's not a surprise, that people too
Are part of the celestial brew.
We're a Human Bouquet,
In some Diverse Array!
Uniqueness being an
Awesome Thing!
We're all part
Of God's
Plan.

*

When you carry it out to the World,
Nothing's ever created exact!
Alike yes, but not the same.
It's a marvelous thing
When you realize,
Under Heaven
God is
King

*

We
Were
Created
In the image
Of God

And

Like
Our Father,
We are creators
Too


*



This Is My Life! writing prompt entry
Writing Prompt
Write a poem, short piece of fiction, or an essay about your philosophy of life. No more than 1000 words.

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I originally posted this in December, 2012. None of my current fans have seen it. I thought it was worth reviving now. Hope you like it.

The Photograph I used for this piece is a picture of me, when I grew my beard out, sans glasses. Please don't think it presumptuous.
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