Commentary and Philosophy Poetry posted November 7, 2012 | Chapters: | ...45 46 -47- 48... |
Abandoned Past
A chapter in the book Picture Poems, Vol 2
Tangled, Torn, and Twisted
by Treischel
Abandoned and forgotten along the road, Beside a field no longer sowed, Above the gnarled growth, it rises high, A darkened silhouette in the sky. From its strong blades once water flowed - But that was in the days gone bye. Today it stands there tangled and torn; Dismissed, forgotten, abandoned, forlorn. Its blades are broken, lost and skattered. Its former proud history hasn't mattered. It's choked in vines, covered in thorn - It stands there weathered, beaten, battered. I was out there on that forgotten road, Beside that field no longer sowed. I almost passed it, but I resisted. An opportunity to capture it existed, Of a weathered windmill that really showed - A structure Tangled, Torn, and Twisted. |
When driving down country roads you can't help but see fallow fields, decaying barns, and sad symbols of better times. They provide stunning images of what once was. This is a photograph I took in the Afton Area of Minnesota. It is a good example. Hopefully there are better times ahead.
I recently reposted this after reading a poem of Patcelaw's that was of an ice covered windmill - a stunning image and it reminded me of this. I used this poem in my first published book called Picture Poems.
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and 2 member cents. I recently reposted this after reading a poem of Patcelaw's that was of an ice covered windmill - a stunning image and it reminded me of this. I used this poem in my first published book called Picture Poems.
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