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Abandoned Past

A chapter in the book Picture Poems, Vol 2

Tangled, Torn, and Twisted

by Treischel


Abandoned and forgotten along the road,
Beside a field no longer sowed,
Above the gnarled growth, it rises high,
A darkened silhouette in the sky.
From its strong blades once water flowed
- But that was in the days gone bye.

Today it stands there tangled and torn;
Dismissed, forgotten, abandoned, forlorn.
Its blades are broken, lost and skattered.
Its former proud history hasn't mattered.
It's choked in vines, covered in thorn
- It stands there weathered, beaten, battered.

I was out there on that forgotten road,
Beside that field no longer sowed.
I almost passed it, but I resisted.
An opportunity to capture it existed,
Of a weathered windmill that really showed
- A structure Tangled, Torn, and Twisted.




When driving down country roads you can't help but see fallow fields, decaying barns, and sad symbols of better times. They provide stunning images of what once was. This is a photograph I took in the Afton Area of Minnesota. It is a good example. Hopefully there are better times ahead.

I recently reposted this after reading a poem of Patcelaw's that was of an ice covered windmill - a stunning image and it reminded me of this. I used this poem in my first published book called Picture Poems.
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