Self Improvement Poetry posted March 29, 2025


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A Sedoka Poem for the club challenge

The wrong war

by kahpot

 
 
after many wars
 

I return to my country
 

with anxious heart racing time

~

stilled upon vision
 

of the home I left behind
 

to save those I never knew
 
 



Recognized


I do believe all wars are wrong
LIST OF WAKA
Haiku 5/7/5 or less
senryu 5/7/5 or less
katauta 5/7/7
choka 5/7/5/7/5/7/5/7/7
tanka 5/7/5/7/7
busso 5/7/5/7/7/7
sedoka 5/7/7/5/7/7

Thank you Gypsy Blue Rose for leading this club

Club entry for the "WAKA POEMS" event in "JAPANESE POETRY CLUB".  Locate a writing club.
Pays one point and 2 member cents.


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