Commentary and Philosophy Poetry posted February 5, 2024 Chapters:  ...152 153 -154- 155... 


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A chapter in the book Commentary and Philosophy

Primordial Slime

by Treischel

 
 

Silent steel butterflies

carry malicious messages

in worried skies of annihilation

 

Past

sleeping radars and

unwary watch towers

 

The rocket strikes

spewing ancient rot around it

like a vomiting volcano

arousing pain

arousing violent counteraction

seeking to be free

 

Unleashing chaos

 

Slinging arrows of death

over the Sultan’s sands

where

the blood runs red

in a mixed emulsion

that grips the soul

 

The sucking muck of primal slime

pulls the achilles,

holding society’s boot

fast as a convict’s vices

 

Reaching up causes anguish

breaks the seal

 

When weeping begins

marching in silent  bootsteps

see the meaningless salute

to a half-raised flag

 

 





This is written in response to the recent drone attack in Iraq by Iranian proxies that killed 3 Americans and wounded 41. I wrote this after watching President Biden receive the dead at Dover Airforce Base and then saw his weak response in retaliation.
Primordial slime represents the bloody soil from all wars of all time.
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