Spiritual Poetry posted June 11, 2023


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as paradise to embrace~ her pleasance

The Garden

by White-tower

Adam~ from the dust
The presence~ a hug from Eve
A taste of Heaven?

A warmth to pour~ like wine
An innocence with God~ to satisfy
The presence with trust~ beauty... thus delight

The honest fruit to enjoy~ one's birthright.


A merry people
A paradise~ the Earth with
An advent of peace.

A merry people will
The hope of desire to celebrate Life
The crown of sire with Jesus Christ~ to wed

An eternal thought~ not a prick instead.




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2x (5-7-5, 6-10-10, 10 syl. counts)

Thanks MoonWillow for "From Grapes to Wine"~ very beautiful...
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