The Garden
as paradise to embrace~ her pleasance2 total reviews
Comment from Lea Tonin1
Nice! The story of Adam and Eve full of valuable lessons in so many ways. A lovely poem with a sweet picture of sun kissed grapes.
I appreciate your word choices and your specific style of dragon is unique and always interesting.
Another lovely poem but I see no need of change as there is no grammar or aesthetic issues at all. Enjoyable calm I wish you the best of luck and a great day!
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Nice! The story of Adam and Eve full of valuable lessons in so many ways. A lovely poem with a sweet picture of sun kissed grapes.
I appreciate your word choices and your specific style of dragon is unique and always interesting.
Another lovely poem but I see no need of change as there is no grammar or aesthetic issues at all. Enjoyable calm I wish you the best of luck and a great day!
Comment Written 12-Jun-2023
Comment from Michelle D. Carr
Incan understand your images easily and find that this poem gives a spiritual lift. I loved the images of a hug from Eve and warmth to pour like wine. I thought it flowed well.
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Incan understand your images easily and find that this poem gives a spiritual lift. I loved the images of a hug from Eve and warmth to pour like wine. I thought it flowed well.
Comment Written 11-Jun-2023