General Poetry posted January 11, 2023 Chapters:  ...204 205 -206- 207... 


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5/6/6 modern haiku

A chapter in the book One Thousand Cranes

Overgrown Garden

by Gypsy Blue Rose


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overgrown garden
simmers in laziness —
crickets chirp warms the heart
 

 




MODERN HAIKU is the English adaptation of Classic Haiku. It's written in one to four lines with no strict syllable count but is as brief as possible. These poems use a pause usually marked by a dash before the satori (an insightful twist to ponder). Images don't need to be taken from nature. Seasonality is optional. Alliteration and metaphor are okay. Never rhymes. The em-dash ( -- ) is used to emphasize an interruption in speech before the satori. Haiku usually doesn't have a title but in fanstory, we have to have one. The Haiku Foundation of America

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Gypsy
"Poetry heals the wounds inflicted by reason" -- Novalis
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