Unliving Room
a script8 total reviews
Comment from BethShelby
Well, I suppose if you don't want to be disturbed from your writing these unlivingroom furniture pieces would b nice to have around. However if no one visits and their pieces get hungry enough that tongue could ber longue enough to reach for the owners.
reply by the author on 08-May-2024
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Well, I suppose if you don't want to be disturbed from your writing these unlivingroom furniture pieces would b nice to have around. However if no one visits and their pieces get hungry enough that tongue could ber longue enough to reach for the owners.
Comment Written 08-May-2024
reply by the author on 08-May-2024
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I hate it when furniture turns on me.
Comment from kahpot
Amazing, what seems to start out very questionable comes to somehow make sense, maybe your words/story is so absorbing, leaving us needing, thanks for the smiles, very well done****kahpot
reply by the author on 05-May-2024
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Amazing, what seems to start out very questionable comes to somehow make sense, maybe your words/story is so absorbing, leaving us needing, thanks for the smiles, very well done****kahpot
Comment Written 05-May-2024
reply by the author on 05-May-2024
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Thank you, kahpot
Comment from nomi338
It would appear that this i not a good place or time to visit this busy and under the gun writer/author. As his hungry imagination is likely to devour any tasty visitor/victim who happens to wander by.
reply by the author on 05-May-2024
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It would appear that this i not a good place or time to visit this busy and under the gun writer/author. As his hungry imagination is likely to devour any tasty visitor/victim who happens to wander by.
Comment Written 05-May-2024
reply by the author on 05-May-2024
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Needs a Do-Not-Disturb sign.
Comment from Ulla
Oh dear, Bill, this was ominous to say the least. Especially for those who encountered Dr Davenport. Deare me. Where the heck you get it from, I do not know but it makes me laugh. Ulla :)))
reply by the author on 05-May-2024
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Oh dear, Bill, this was ominous to say the least. Especially for those who encountered Dr Davenport. Deare me. Where the heck you get it from, I do not know but it makes me laugh. Ulla :)))
Comment Written 05-May-2024
reply by the author on 05-May-2024
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So glad. Thank you, Ulla.
Comment from Karen Cherry Threadgill
Completely odd, and what I have come to expect from you. How do you make crazy seem so believable. You have talent mister. I wish my science fiction had the snap yours does. Karen
reply by the author on 05-May-2024
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Completely odd, and what I have come to expect from you. How do you make crazy seem so believable. You have talent mister. I wish my science fiction had the snap yours does. Karen
Comment Written 05-May-2024
reply by the author on 05-May-2024
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Thank you, Karen. I don't know what you mean; your writing is great.
Comment from Michael Ludwinder
Wow, that was quite the scene! You have a a creative blend of humor and a touch of horror. The way you've personified the furniture as fiends from Frump 6 adds a unique twist to the story. Dr. Davenport's ability to speak in tongues and the couch's enjoyment of eating visitors definitely make for an entertaining read. The interaction between Arthur and the visitors, Nick and Nancy, is so funny (okay, and a bit unsettling). Great job!
reply by the author on 05-May-2024
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Wow, that was quite the scene! You have a a creative blend of humor and a touch of horror. The way you've personified the furniture as fiends from Frump 6 adds a unique twist to the story. Dr. Davenport's ability to speak in tongues and the couch's enjoyment of eating visitors definitely make for an entertaining read. The interaction between Arthur and the visitors, Nick and Nancy, is so funny (okay, and a bit unsettling). Great job!
Comment Written 05-May-2024
reply by the author on 05-May-2024
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Thank you, Michael, for the great review.
Comment from lyenochka
"His deadline"? So Arthur is the "author" and is writing in the "Nick" of time? And was Nancy on crutches? I didn't see any previous reference to the crutches she was carrying. Guess she won't be needing them now.
qaStaHvIS QoywI'pu' !
My PSU prof was a consultant for Klingon.
reply by the author on 04-May-2024
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"His deadline"? So Arthur is the "author" and is writing in the "Nick" of time? And was Nancy on crutches? I didn't see any previous reference to the crutches she was carrying. Guess she won't be needing them now.
qaStaHvIS QoywI'pu' !
My PSU prof was a consultant for Klingon.
Comment Written 04-May-2024
reply by the author on 04-May-2024
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Nancy has the crutches at the door.
Comment from jim vecchio
I'm glad you posted this! I've been telling everyone I can that I have a box of disposable underwear from Alpha Centauri. You can't trust anything nowadays. And I even wonder about myself.
reply by the author on 04-May-2024
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I'm glad you posted this! I've been telling everyone I can that I have a box of disposable underwear from Alpha Centauri. You can't trust anything nowadays. And I even wonder about myself.
Comment Written 04-May-2024
reply by the author on 04-May-2024
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Alpha Centauri?
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Maybe it's Alpha Proximus.
