Good humor kept secret 'til the very end and then sprung on the unsuspecting reader.
Just how things take hold even when you are safe. Excellent description, fear subject and twit at the end.
I loved the humor in it.
Truly got shivers from reading these. I also hate spiders and snakes. I chose submerged because I do have a fear of drowning. But, more to the point I shall never forget the first time I took my children through a car wash, the fear on their little faces made me realize I need to explain things first.
