For me, it was a choice between this and "You were Refreshing". I thought the middle line gave this one depth and conveyed the author's feelings about their childhood.
Enjoyed the creativity.
Beyond brilliant! Instead of beating swords into plowshares, the author beat words into swords. Exactly one hundred of them.
'simplicity of childhood' - pity the clock can't turn back to those enjoyable days again
Hope the next is the best.
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