This is not only very well written, but it also has an important message, which is at once personal and universal in appeal.
You've encapsulated two important isses in such a few words: 1) There is more unrest now than at any time in our lifetimes and 2) We must not lose sight of the value we still have in our lives, including our friendships.
The artwork is a nice addition. I like that you used a drawing and not a photo. It makes all the turmoil seem less dangerous and divisive than a photo would.
Your poem helps us remember what's important in a time of ultimate confusion. I thank you for that.
A great tribute to Steve Jobs and Bill Gates.
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