Wow, I loved this entry for the Memories Writing prompt contest. Instantly I was captured by the rythm and rhyme, and how smoothly and lyrically it flowed. I think it's a winner. Good luck in the contest. The rating slide bar didn't allow me to select any rating. My choice would be a six.
This poem is so sweet! I love it!
Love it!
By far and away best of class. This made me cry!
Pure emotion... so moving.
