Outstanding. Clever and polished, lots of layers to unwrap and enjoy in this poem. :)
'Twas the heartless harpy that grabbed me. We all know them.
I'm a sucker for a happy ending.
Beautiful piece of poetry.
Very well written and straight to the point. A lesson learned.
Some wonderful imagery and a kicker of an ending. I guess the man-stealer fattened up and lost her allure.
Rather than write about sloth you demonstrate how to live the role
I like your choice of sin and how you listed its negative effects and all in rhyme.
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