Astonishing! Absolutely the best presentation in the "Children Poetry Category" that I have read on FanStory. Thanks for sharing, best wishes and God Bless.
An excellent poem showing the many questions and curiosity that a child has.
Hilarious!
A great message.
I did react negatively to the picture--think it's because she's dressed 'properly' but is visibly seething . Thanks for making me think:)
This rant about the failings of modern society's relationships, personal, political and environmental (especially 'mental') is stuffed full of interesting imagery.
