This one and careless match both tied for my vote, but I opted for this one for three reasons: 1) the other one got my last six, so i did not have one for this! 2) the phonetics are fantastic 3) the imagery and personfiication show an interconnections between mature and humanity--nature's respect...which humanity needs to reciprocate...
the other one has a superb satori and phonetics with FLAMING DISGRACE as well.
Bravo for both those effective PUN-satoris!
This is the best one by far. There are so many fallen heroes resting in their graves across our world, so sad....
Poignant yet perfect.
brilliant!
A well written poem describing the destruction of what a tiny little match can do to the forest. Well written in the "Death to Nature", 5-7-5 poem form. Very creative in words and message.
Fine poem spoke in metaphor instead of gore.
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