Dramatic and well-written. I like the way it builds in a crescendo to the final line: "Deo gracias! Risen Lord!" It has a smooth flow and a nice touch of rhyme.
One of only two entrants to achieve a sound poem in addition to meeting the acrostic requirements. This managed it over a greater length (twice as long in fact) so gets my vote.
The words were as beautiful as the metamorphose of the caterpillar into the lovely butterfly.
Beautifully done, we can change when the Lord touches our lives we become a new creature.
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