Beautiful. poignant
The life of love was well document in rhyme. It moved me to tears.
It's like a sweet fairy tale.
The poems entered in this contest all met the objective and it was interesting to read each one.
In my opinion, The Story Of Us, told a beautiful love story from start to end. The fluency of the poem, as well as the rhyming, was excellent.
Now when our sun is sinking
and our petals strip us bare...
just touched me so...deeply and softly...
