I love criticism, and any kind of feedback. Don't spare the rod.
Dana Starr: In your Corned Beef Hash story I'd recommend changing everyday to every day in the last line of the story. Everyday can mean ordinary or typical. It's a minor nit picky thing but I thought I'd mention it. Like you, I welcome real criticism and feedback that's actually helpful. -
nor84: We aren't supposed to review works in the forum. -