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kittykatnoel: Just reading back through some old reviews. For some reason the 1,2 and 3 star reviews were hilarious to me. Everyone should try it. They weren't so funny the first time around, time heals all things.


kittykatnoel: What do you all think of two protagonists? They are separated early in the story, so each have their own view to show. I'd love to know.
    F. Wehr3: I think it's great. Stick with third person POV. You could do limited, multiple or episodic limited, or omniscient.

    BTW, third person omniscient is the format for Sunday Prose Potlatch. We announce the topic at 3pm eastern (fanstory time). Join us in the forum under challenges.

    All are welcome! It will be fun! Tell your friends! -
    nor84: I agree. Give them separate chapters, at first. Make the reader like each one, whatever fits your plot. The reader wants to understand what each wants or needs, and then worry whether they will get it. Then they meet and the story continues. -
    kittykatnoel: Thank you for the suggestions. Very helpful. -
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