Natalie16 : I have revised the Prologue: Her Beginning. I used a lot less "telling" and used more "showing." The prologue will provide the details of Molly Murphy's tragic early life. (And might give clues to her future.) Please read. I appreciate any type of feedback. Thank You! |
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Natalie16 : I would like to thank everybody for all the feedback I got. I have received so much great advice and I have only been on FanStory for one day. |
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Natalie16 : Hello everybody. I am new here. I am feeling my way around the site. I just uploaded my first story. A prologue to my first novel. I also did my first review. |
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There are forums where people ask all sorts of stuff, if you haven't seen them already (this message goes to the Profile Thoughts forum, which is where I've seen it). If you look under the Profile tab on the main menu, you'll find the forums there. :) - | ||
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