wleeb: P.S. if you look in my reviews and see emitres, that is my wife. She is my primary reader of new material, and she doesn't let me off easy. Try to be at least as tough as her, and you will make me a happy scribe! |
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wleeb: To those who review my work, I am looking for some real constructive criticism, so don't worry so much about hurting my feelings. I taught boys out of high school at a technical institute for five years; my skin is thick. What you see here is me practicing, trying to hone my skill. I seriously hope to be a published author some day,and i seriously believe i am not yet ready for that. I sit down with stories like majestic castles in my head, and what you see here is the result, which to me still looks like cardboard boxes painted silver with the word castle scrawled in kid's crayon on the side. Please help me to improve. Thanks and take care. |
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