VLeeDaniel: Please forgive me when I remark about "showing" in your story reviews, instead of "telling." I pretty much leave spelling alone and I truly enjoy reading a story when the author uses creative attributives. But this is all coming from a woman who used to spell check any written material that her children were kind enough to write. Once when my "baby" was in college, she wrote to have me look over her paper before she submitted it. In her note she misspelled or misused a word and I wrote to remind her about the spell checks when she was a little girl. She wrote back, "I only remember the hearts you drew in my peanut butter sandwiches." That wasn't fair, but it put me in my place and you can do the same. Verna |
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