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The Corona saga

Viewing comments for Chapter 65 "Aussies come back"
to keep my sanity in time of pandemic

10 total reviews 
Comment from Rosemary Everson1
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Let's see, what do you mean by Aussies? I think you are referring to a breed of a dog. A gorgeous dog, in fact. But then it didn't blend in with what you were writing...Aussie are considered an instructor?

 Comment Written 24-Apr-2021

Comment from KyColonel Randal
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Thank you for sharing this piece. I'm going to have to look up where Banff is located. What a period in history to live through, this pandemic stuff, eh? Anyways, good luck with your contest entry!

 Comment Written 22-Mar-2021


reply by the author on 23-Mar-2021
    Thank you so much, and Banff is located in Rocky Mountains Alberta, Canada:)
reply by KyColonel Randal on 23-Mar-2021
    You're welcome.
Comment from Y. M. Roger
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LOl!! :) What a great Flash for the current times, my lady -- great attention holder and point made (with a big grin!) .... ;) Best of luck! ;) Yvette

He, he I'm talking --> He-he. I'm talking


 Comment Written 14-Oct-2020

Comment from Sandra du Plessis
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A very well-written eighty-word flash fiction about the virus that totally ruined the tourism industry in so many ways that it seems impossible to restore the damages in the nearby future.

 Comment Written 13-Oct-2020


reply by the author on 14-Oct-2020
    Thank you
Comment from DeboraDyess
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What a fun story!!

Germans, Brits, Irish but the >> I'd separate the 'but the' with an elipse. >> Germans, Brits, Irish ... but the

He, he I'm talking about s >> lol >> Hee-hee! I'm talking about

attractive with funny accent >> attractive-with-funny-accent marriage

LOL!! Could this be funnier? NO! What is it about accents that drives us nuts? My daughter recently met a guy from South Africa. (What was he doing here in Central Texas! Dunno...) She was SO taken with him. Yes, he's cute. Yes, he's smart and driven. But what did she rave on and on about? THe ACCENT of course! lol

Great entry for the contest, Iza!
Best of luck and blessings,
Deb




 Comment Written 12-Oct-2020

Comment from estory
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A nice witty, humorous post on the coronavirus saga. I like the pondering on skiing and surfing. Never thought of the comparison between the two, but I guess there are similiarities. Who knows when travel and leisure will recover. Maybe next year. We can always hope. estory

 Comment Written 12-Oct-2020

Comment from lyenochka
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That's so funny, especially your last sentence. I know what you mean - we miss the tourists in every state. When I would go visit my parents in Hawaii - there were so many Aussie tourists but alas, due to Covid, the hotels and restaurants are empty. So sad as it's the main economy of the state!

 Comment Written 11-Oct-2020


reply by the author on 22-Mar-2021
    Thank you:)
Comment from Elizabeth Emerald
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Wickedly clever--double entendre--I never tried them (the sports vs the guys). Amusing punchline. Sugg: Young, attractive, marriage material--with funny accents! Cheers. LIZ

 Comment Written 11-Oct-2020

Comment from Katherine M. (k-11)
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This is just one vignette to illustrate how our lives have changed this year. The changes have not in general been for the best , and decisions that would protect the general public seem to have come too little too late.

 Comment Written 11-Oct-2020

Comment from royowen
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Yes, surfing is much different to snow skiing a lot different to surfing Iza. Beautifully written dear girl. A n excellent work and very expressive, well done Blessings Roy

 Comment Written 11-Oct-2020