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Comment from roof35
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Well, I enjoyed this poem and the lovely little girl. You are brave to write this as you will probably get some grief for it. It is well written. Thanks for sharing.

 Comment Written 10-Oct-2020

Comment from Carmen Ducharme
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I like your poem the way you rhymed we do need to get our country back to great again unfortunately we do not have the same opinions we need LOVE in the world today

 Comment Written 10-Oct-2020

Comment from Sarah Webb
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I got a little confused at first when I saw the picture but then it made a little more sense after I read the whole thing. It is funny and so true at the same time. Good job I really enjoyed it.

 Comment Written 10-Oct-2020

Comment from Pantygynt
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Even without the note and although I am not even a US citizen I recognize the fly guy you are swatting here and since yesterday he insulted the land of Wales where I live I am right with you, Rhonnie. ZAP!

 Comment Written 10-Oct-2020

Comment from amada
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This is sa very good poem/satire, whatever...it made me laugh. i agree with everything you say in here. I hope we show the biggest, best turn out at the polls. Thank you for your encouragementg.

 Comment Written 09-Oct-2020

Comment from Cindy Decker
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Rhonnie, your poem made me smile! The photo of the child with the fly's water is cute!
Rhonnie, I love your sarcasm so much! Voters everywhere needed you you as their spokesperson .Excellent poem Rhonnie. (Sorry I ran out of six stars because this poem deserves them.)
Good luck in the contest,
Cindy

 Comment Written 09-Oct-2020