Fallen Heroes
Tributes to our fallen U.S. Soldiers.4 total reviews
Comment from Becky Kern-Taylor
What a beautiful tribute to our unsung heroes. So many people exist who give so much to our country in the manner of volunteerism. As for the workers in the medical field, their bravery is fantastic and deserves so much praise. This is a wonderful piece.
reply by the author on 13-Oct-2020
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What a beautiful tribute to our unsung heroes. So many people exist who give so much to our country in the manner of volunteerism. As for the workers in the medical field, their bravery is fantastic and deserves so much praise. This is a wonderful piece.
Comment Written 13-Oct-2020
reply by the author on 13-Oct-2020
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Thank you! I'm glad you enjoyed my poem!
Comment from Jannypan (Jan)
You did a super job with your tribute to our fallen military men and women. Your lines read smoothly with great imagery. I could feel your pride as I read this. We owe everything to these essential workers. They should be praised everyday by all.
[May I ask if the lime green background has any significance? It seems a bit 'off.' I would try a black background with white font OR light blue background with a much darker font. However, I know it is your choice.]
Best wishes.
Respectfully, Jan
reply by the author on 08-Oct-2020
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You did a super job with your tribute to our fallen military men and women. Your lines read smoothly with great imagery. I could feel your pride as I read this. We owe everything to these essential workers. They should be praised everyday by all.
[May I ask if the lime green background has any significance? It seems a bit 'off.' I would try a black background with white font OR light blue background with a much darker font. However, I know it is your choice.]
Best wishes.
Respectfully, Jan
Comment Written 08-Oct-2020
reply by the author on 08-Oct-2020
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Thanks! I have changed the background color. I hope to win. I'm crossing my fingers. I'm glad you enjoyed my poem!
Comment from beizanten
A well written opening paragraph. A rather strong second paragraph. Beautifully written third paragraph. Overall a very good piece of poetry. Keep up the great work
reply by the author on 08-Oct-2020
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A well written opening paragraph. A rather strong second paragraph. Beautifully written third paragraph. Overall a very good piece of poetry. Keep up the great work
Comment Written 08-Oct-2020
reply by the author on 08-Oct-2020
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Thanks! I'm glad you enjoyed my poem! Thank you for the compliment! I will.
Comment from Vanna1
Typo fought. You say live twice in the same stanza. I would consider revising it. I like your theme. Good presentation. We need to be thankful for other peoples sacrifices.
reply by the author on 08-Oct-2020
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Typo fought. You say live twice in the same stanza. I would consider revising it. I like your theme. Good presentation. We need to be thankful for other peoples sacrifices.
Comment Written 08-Oct-2020
reply by the author on 08-Oct-2020
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Thanks! I have fixed the mistakes. You can check it again. I'm glad you enjoyed my poem!
