My Cat Smiled
a 5-7-521 total reviews
Comment from Mark D. R.
We are smiling with your post in this 5-7-5 contest. Often smiles are painted on. I am OK with this cute one.
Do check out the difference between which and that. I think my formal English majors would typically place a comma before 'which' but not that. I have no real issue with your version.
Mark
reply by the author on 09-Oct-2020
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We are smiling with your post in this 5-7-5 contest. Often smiles are painted on. I am OK with this cute one.
Do check out the difference between which and that. I think my formal English majors would typically place a comma before 'which' but not that. I have no real issue with your version.
Mark
Comment Written 09-Oct-2020
reply by the author on 09-Oct-2020
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This haiku-esque design always teeters on whether punctuation is necessary. Since the comma doesn?t occur within the line, I chose the lesser two probable debates.
Comment from thaities, Rebecca V.
I enjoyed this entry for the Just for Fun (5-7-5) writing prompt. There is humor in your words. I hope this poem does well in the contest!
reply by the author on 09-Oct-2020
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I enjoyed this entry for the Just for Fun (5-7-5) writing prompt. There is humor in your words. I hope this poem does well in the contest!
Comment Written 09-Oct-2020
reply by the author on 09-Oct-2020
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Thanks, TT. It finished second.
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Yea!!
Comment from Laurie Holding
This did the trick for me! Made me smile on kind of a stupid day, so I thank you! I think it's fun to warm up in the mornings with a FanStory poem, especially one with rules and confines like this type. Well done, and I voted for you!
reply by the author on 09-Oct-2020
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This did the trick for me! Made me smile on kind of a stupid day, so I thank you! I think it's fun to warm up in the mornings with a FanStory poem, especially one with rules and confines like this type. Well done, and I voted for you!
Comment Written 09-Oct-2020
reply by the author on 09-Oct-2020
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Thank you, Laurie!
Comment from palmart
Great poem! The smile you caused in your cat brought one to you and for the reader of your poem, as well!! Nice wording and, of course, unbeatable picture!!
reply by the author on 09-Oct-2020
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Great poem! The smile you caused in your cat brought one to you and for the reader of your poem, as well!! Nice wording and, of course, unbeatable picture!!
Comment Written 09-Oct-2020
reply by the author on 09-Oct-2020
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Thanks, palmart, for the terrific review.
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You´re welcome, Author!! Have a great time!
Comment from Liz O'Neill
This poem might win. Everyone loves a cat. We've all seen our cat discontented or disgruntled. I love how you literally put the smile on the cat's face. I read that cats like us to smile. I have a Maine Coon who gets grumpy and sometimes when I smile at him he yowls as if to FU.
reply by the author on 09-Oct-2020
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This poem might win. Everyone loves a cat. We've all seen our cat discontented or disgruntled. I love how you literally put the smile on the cat's face. I read that cats like us to smile. I have a Maine Coon who gets grumpy and sometimes when I smile at him he yowls as if to FU.
Comment Written 08-Oct-2020
reply by the author on 09-Oct-2020
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That?s funny. : )
Comment from Mia Twysted
I love the picture. It made me smile as well. The words go very well with it and deepen the laughter. I think this is a wonderful entry for this contest. I wish you good luck.
reply by the author on 09-Oct-2020
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I love the picture. It made me smile as well. The words go very well with it and deepen the laughter. I think this is a wonderful entry for this contest. I wish you good luck.
Comment Written 08-Oct-2020
reply by the author on 09-Oct-2020
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Thank you, Mia
Comment from Gypsy Blue Rose
Hello anonymous
Great entry for the Just for Fun (5-7-5) writing prompt contest. Good syllable count and connection between lines. It flows nicely. Making the cat smile is a cute idea. Good luck in the contest.
reply by the author on 08-Oct-2020
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Hello anonymous
Great entry for the Just for Fun (5-7-5) writing prompt contest. Good syllable count and connection between lines. It flows nicely. Making the cat smile is a cute idea. Good luck in the contest.
Comment Written 08-Oct-2020
reply by the author on 08-Oct-2020
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Thanks, GBR
Comment from Cynthia Adams1
This poem is so inventive and fun.
I think yours is a strong contender in the contest...there are some good ones and yours is certainly one of them.
Best of luck--to you and your cat.
reply by the author on 08-Oct-2020
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This poem is so inventive and fun.
I think yours is a strong contender in the contest...there are some good ones and yours is certainly one of them.
Best of luck--to you and your cat.
Comment Written 08-Oct-2020
reply by the author on 08-Oct-2020
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Thanks, Cynthia
Comment from Dolly'sPoems
Ha ha ha, I laughter so much at this presentation and you really cheered up my day, a very humorous post, did you take the picture? Much fun, love Dolly x
reply by the author on 08-Oct-2020
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Ha ha ha, I laughter so much at this presentation and you really cheered up my day, a very humorous post, did you take the picture? Much fun, love Dolly x
Comment Written 08-Oct-2020
reply by the author on 08-Oct-2020
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Thanks, Dolly. The pic is from the internet.
Comment from Miss Cookie Atkinson
I like the picture you choose to go with your poem, they are a prefect match.You captured my attention from the start just seeing the the chestnut smile on your cats face made me chuckle for awhile.
Thank you for sharing
Cookie
reply by the author on 08-Oct-2020
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I like the picture you choose to go with your poem, they are a prefect match.You captured my attention from the start just seeing the the chestnut smile on your cats face made me chuckle for awhile.
Thank you for sharing
Cookie
Comment Written 08-Oct-2020
reply by the author on 08-Oct-2020
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Thanks, Miss Cookie
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My pleasure
Cookie
