1st Grade Love
How He Won Me Over7 total reviews
Comment from Alchera
This is so cosy, tiny, happily together! They seem two old friends and a life time friendship or even more. Beautifully written and told throughout the picture selected, too! Suggestion: Centralize the layout and drop the third line capital letter and add a comma at the end of the second line if you like and then give a look at it! I did read the Writing Prompt notes! Great work and congratulations and cheers for the victory!
reply by the author on 14-Oct-2020
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This is so cosy, tiny, happily together! They seem two old friends and a life time friendship or even more. Beautifully written and told throughout the picture selected, too! Suggestion: Centralize the layout and drop the third line capital letter and add a comma at the end of the second line if you like and then give a look at it! I did read the Writing Prompt notes! Great work and congratulations and cheers for the victory!
Comment Written 14-Oct-2020
reply by the author on 14-Oct-2020
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i shall take your advice and make changes! gracias, Tony
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yes! so much nicer! thank you very much!
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Always welcome!
Comment from Gypsy Blue Rose
Hello anonymous
Great entry for the Just for Fun (5-7-5) writing prompt contest. Good syllable count and connection between lines. It flows nicely. Cute idea and the picture is perfect for the poem. Good luck in the contest.
reply by the author on 08-Oct-2020
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Hello anonymous
Great entry for the Just for Fun (5-7-5) writing prompt contest. Good syllable count and connection between lines. It flows nicely. Cute idea and the picture is perfect for the poem. Good luck in the contest.
Comment Written 08-Oct-2020
reply by the author on 08-Oct-2020
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thank you very much!
Comment from John Cole
I read this over and over. It says so much in just three lines. How simple things are in 1st grade, love is pure and without an agenda. Though life takes twists and turns as we grow older the simplicity of 1st grade love should always remain. Very nice job
reply by the author on 08-Oct-2020
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I read this over and over. It says so much in just three lines. How simple things are in 1st grade, love is pure and without an agenda. Though life takes twists and turns as we grow older the simplicity of 1st grade love should always remain. Very nice job
Comment Written 08-Oct-2020
reply by the author on 08-Oct-2020
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yea, it is sweet to have the heart of a child
Comment from palmart
Nice poem with the details of a couple of children learning and teaching each other, bringing new challenges in their lives as, for example, to tie shoelaces. Picture brings some freshness to the poem, nicely shown under the rain.
reply by the author on 08-Oct-2020
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Nice poem with the details of a couple of children learning and teaching each other, bringing new challenges in their lives as, for example, to tie shoelaces. Picture brings some freshness to the poem, nicely shown under the rain.
Comment Written 08-Oct-2020
reply by the author on 08-Oct-2020
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Im glad you liked it
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Thank you for your message!
Comment from Cynthia Adams1
This poem is so sweet...makes me smile...and makes me think some things don't change in the world.
I think yours is a strong contender in the contest...there are some good ones and yours is certainly one of them.
The artwork was precious and perfect.
Good luck!
reply by the author on 08-Oct-2020
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This poem is so sweet...makes me smile...and makes me think some things don't change in the world.
I think yours is a strong contender in the contest...there are some good ones and yours is certainly one of them.
The artwork was precious and perfect.
Good luck!
Comment Written 08-Oct-2020
reply by the author on 08-Oct-2020
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Thank you Cynthia!
Comment from zanya
What a super cutie duo - to warm our hearts and remind us of the lighter side of life in these dark days -yes love can often begin early and last a lifetime !
reply by the author on 07-Oct-2020
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What a super cutie duo - to warm our hearts and remind us of the lighter side of life in these dark days -yes love can often begin early and last a lifetime !
Comment Written 07-Oct-2020
reply by the author on 07-Oct-2020
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glad you like it!
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WOW thank you for Six Stars!
Comment from Michael Ludwinder
This put a big smile on my face. I love the way you share a story and use the third line to show where it goes from there. Very creative and enjoyable.
reply by the author on 07-Oct-2020
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This put a big smile on my face. I love the way you share a story and use the third line to show where it goes from there. Very creative and enjoyable.
Comment Written 07-Oct-2020
reply by the author on 07-Oct-2020
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thank you for the really nice review!