Death Is A Seed
No amount of love shared goes unnoticed.18 total reviews
Comment from Dolly'sPoems
Death often means renewal although I love life so much I think I shall go out kicking and screaming! You made me smile here, a poignant one liner, love Dolly x
reply by the author on 10-Oct-2020
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Death often means renewal although I love life so much I think I shall go out kicking and screaming! You made me smile here, a poignant one liner, love Dolly x
Comment Written 09-Oct-2020
reply by the author on 10-Oct-2020
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Hi, Dolly. Thank you for your kind words!
Have a great day and God bless.
mike
Comment from Pam (respa)
-Good image and
presentation, Mike.
-Your note is appreciated,
and it is an interesting idea.
-Effective imagery and alliteration,
as well as a good topic.
-This contest calls for one
line, not one sentence.
-Try reducing your font
size and taking out a few
words if you need to.
-Good luck in the contest.
reply by the author on 10-Oct-2020
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-Good image and
presentation, Mike.
-Your note is appreciated,
and it is an interesting idea.
-Effective imagery and alliteration,
as well as a good topic.
-This contest calls for one
line, not one sentence.
-Try reducing your font
size and taking out a few
words if you need to.
-Good luck in the contest.
Comment Written 08-Oct-2020
reply by the author on 10-Oct-2020
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Hi, Pam. Thank you for your kind words and help with this poem!
Have a great day and God bless.
mike
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You are very welcome, Mike.
Comment from Cindy Decker
Mike,
You've written a very poignant poem. The bright yellow background gives an uplifting feel to a sad subject. But I believe we continue on to heaven, because nature and God regards love and life as precious he gives to us forever.
Thank you for such a touching poem.
Best wishes,
Cindy.
reply by the author on 10-Oct-2020
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Mike,
You've written a very poignant poem. The bright yellow background gives an uplifting feel to a sad subject. But I believe we continue on to heaven, because nature and God regards love and life as precious he gives to us forever.
Thank you for such a touching poem.
Best wishes,
Cindy.
Comment Written 07-Oct-2020
reply by the author on 10-Oct-2020
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Hi, Cindy. Thank you for your kind words, and I believe in Heaven, too.
Have a great day and God bless.
mike
Comment from Mary Kay Bonfante
Very profound statement, in a one-line poem -- and it encapsulates the concept of Christian love very well: "Very truly I tell you, unless a kernel of wheat falls to the ground and dies, it remains only a single seed. But if it dies, it produces many seeds."
John 12:24 NIV
You've got a variety of seeds there in that photo, which is very colorful. At first it looks like gravel, but when you look closer, you can see corn, maybe some sunflower seeds, possibly mustard seeds and perhaps others.
reply by the author on 10-Oct-2020
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Very profound statement, in a one-line poem -- and it encapsulates the concept of Christian love very well: "Very truly I tell you, unless a kernel of wheat falls to the ground and dies, it remains only a single seed. But if it dies, it produces many seeds."
John 12:24 NIV
You've got a variety of seeds there in that photo, which is very colorful. At first it looks like gravel, but when you look closer, you can see corn, maybe some sunflower seeds, possibly mustard seeds and perhaps others.
Comment Written 07-Oct-2020
reply by the author on 10-Oct-2020
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Hi, Mary Kay. That's a picture of my birdseed. Thank you for your kind words!
Have a great day, and God bless.
mike
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It's sweet that you feed birds. You also have a lovely profile picture. God bless you. - Mary Kay
Comment from Vanna1
I like you thought and image. I think we spread more love alive then dead. Life is a seed that if we plant in abundant soil it grows and spreads to others. I like how you made something negative have a positive side.
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I like you thought and image. I think we spread more love alive then dead. Life is a seed that if we plant in abundant soil it grows and spreads to others. I like how you made something negative have a positive side.
Comment Written 07-Oct-2020
reply by the author on 10-Oct-2020
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Hello, my friend. Thank you for your kind words!
Have a great day, and God bless.
mike
Comment from Raul1
I have enjoyed reading your piece of poetry. The sentences flow with clarity. It is clear and concise. No grammatical errors. Well written. Well done. Good luck on the contest!
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I have enjoyed reading your piece of poetry. The sentences flow with clarity. It is clear and concise. No grammatical errors. Well written. Well done. Good luck on the contest!
Comment Written 07-Oct-2020
reply by the author on 10-Oct-2020
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Hello, my friend. Thank you for your kind words!
Have a great day and God bless.
mike
Comment from Bill Schott
This one-line poem, Death Is A Seed, uses twenty words and makes a statement about our essence leaving this world and joining the universal float. Nice.
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This one-line poem, Death Is A Seed, uses twenty words and makes a statement about our essence leaving this world and joining the universal float. Nice.
Comment Written 07-Oct-2020
reply by the author on 10-Oct-2020
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Hi, Bill. Thank you for your kind words!
Have a great day and God bless.
mike
Comment from estory
You have an interesting image here of the flower seed as death, containing that idea that life carries on just like flowers carry on from year to year. A hopeful and upbeat look at the passage of life from one dimension to the next. estory
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You have an interesting image here of the flower seed as death, containing that idea that life carries on just like flowers carry on from year to year. A hopeful and upbeat look at the passage of life from one dimension to the next. estory
Comment Written 07-Oct-2020
reply by the author on 10-Oct-2020
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Hello, my friend. Thank you for your kind words!
Have a great day and God bless.
mike
Comment from palmart
Great Poem! It changes the point of view that death is the full stop and when everything ends, Seeds denotes hope, that something will change in the future.
The phrase "No amount of love shared goes unnoticed" depicts that "Energy is not loss, but transformed", so everything done here is transformed into other forms.
reply by the author on 10-Oct-2020
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Great Poem! It changes the point of view that death is the full stop and when everything ends, Seeds denotes hope, that something will change in the future.
The phrase "No amount of love shared goes unnoticed" depicts that "Energy is not loss, but transformed", so everything done here is transformed into other forms.
Comment Written 07-Oct-2020
reply by the author on 10-Oct-2020
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Hello, my friend. That line is the basis of the poem. Thank you for your kind words! I'll be by to read.
Have a great day, and God bless.
mike
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You´re welcome, papa55mike! And thanks for your words!
You may read my latest work and give me your point of view by a review! Feel free to give your opinion!
Have a great time!
Comment from Joanne Gill-Maddick
This is Lovely writing. Our death is the seed of the love we shared that grows and blossoms to fill the universe with beauty. Beautiful choice of words.
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This is Lovely writing. Our death is the seed of the love we shared that grows and blossoms to fill the universe with beauty. Beautiful choice of words.
Comment Written 07-Oct-2020
reply by the author on 10-Oct-2020
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Hello, my friend. Thank you for your kind words!
Have a great day, and God bless.
mike
