I Cast My Spell...
Oh, to rediscover that which was lost!33 total reviews
Comment from dragonpoet
This poem follows the form well and even has some rhyme. I like the use of fantasy figures to remind us of childhood imaginatiion.
Good luck ijh the prompt contest.
Keep writing and stay healthy
dp
reply by the author on 07-Oct-2020
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This poem follows the form well and even has some rhyme. I like the use of fantasy figures to remind us of childhood imaginatiion.
Good luck ijh the prompt contest.
Keep writing and stay healthy
dp
Comment Written 07-Oct-2020
reply by the author on 07-Oct-2020
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Thank you so very much for your review today.
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You are most kindly welcome.
dp
Comment from Monica Chaddick
This is a beautiful piece of poetry with an absolutely gorgeous piece of artwork accompanying it. I had a tiny bit of trouble with the flow of the piece, but it still made for a great read.
reply by the author on 07-Oct-2020
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This is a beautiful piece of poetry with an absolutely gorgeous piece of artwork accompanying it. I had a tiny bit of trouble with the flow of the piece, but it still made for a great read.
Comment Written 07-Oct-2020
reply by the author on 07-Oct-2020
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Thank you for your comments this morning.
Comment from Sandra du Plessis
A very well-written fantasy Trinet about mermaids and dragon breath from childhood musings that are still embraced by a tired heart that bring youthfulness back with endless dreams.
reply by the author on 07-Oct-2020
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A very well-written fantasy Trinet about mermaids and dragon breath from childhood musings that are still embraced by a tired heart that bring youthfulness back with endless dreams.
Comment Written 07-Oct-2020
reply by the author on 07-Oct-2020
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Thank you so very much, Sandra, for your wonderful comments!
Comment from Dawn Munro
Ah, a form with which I am not familiar, but which, when used like this, makes me want to learn more about it--this is beautiful, and so is the artwork you've chosen to illustrate the painting you've already created in my mind with your well-chosen words...
reply by the author on 07-Oct-2020
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Ah, a form with which I am not familiar, but which, when used like this, makes me want to learn more about it--this is beautiful, and so is the artwork you've chosen to illustrate the painting you've already created in my mind with your well-chosen words...
Comment Written 07-Oct-2020
reply by the author on 07-Oct-2020
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Wow... such awesome comments, Dawn!! Thank you so very much for this wonderful review and for those awesome stars... both are so very appreciated and treasured!
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Very much my pleasure. :)
Comment from papa55mike
I keep hearing the saying, your only as old as you think you are. I definitely to work on that. What a wonderfully written poem. I wish I had a six for you!
Good luck in the contest!
Have a great day and God bless.
mike
reply by the author on 07-Oct-2020
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I keep hearing the saying, your only as old as you think you are. I definitely to work on that. What a wonderfully written poem. I wish I had a six for you!
Good luck in the contest!
Have a great day and God bless.
mike
Comment Written 07-Oct-2020
reply by the author on 07-Oct-2020
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Thank you so much for your wonderful comments and virtual six, Mike!! You take care out there today!
Comment from Pam (respa)
-Great artwork and
nice presentation.
-This is a very good poem
with excellent imagery and
smooth flow of ideas.
-I also like your topic and
"Elven magic
Fairy's dust."
-I like your concluding lines, too.
-A very good entry; good luck.
reply by the author on 07-Oct-2020
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-Great artwork and
nice presentation.
-This is a very good poem
with excellent imagery and
smooth flow of ideas.
-I also like your topic and
"Elven magic
Fairy's dust."
-I like your concluding lines, too.
-A very good entry; good luck.
Comment Written 07-Oct-2020
reply by the author on 07-Oct-2020
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Thank you so much for your comments this morning.
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You are very welcome. I enjoyed your poem.
Comment from Dolly'sPoems
A fine fantasy write taking me to another world were the magic power keeps me youthful to enjoy the delights of fairyland, a good poem to escape into here, much enjoyed, love Dolly x
reply by the author on 07-Oct-2020
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A fine fantasy write taking me to another world were the magic power keeps me youthful to enjoy the delights of fairyland, a good poem to escape into here, much enjoyed, love Dolly x
Comment Written 07-Oct-2020
reply by the author on 07-Oct-2020
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Thank you very much for your comments.
Comment from Cass Carlton
This reads like the words from an ancient elven scroll. It is full of beautiful images and dreamy thoughts that beguile the senses. The lovely artwork suggests a dryad spirit casting her magic over the waterfall and anyone who comes close enough to be affected. She is a peaceful lady, full of love and hope who desires only to bring harmony to the world. The poem speaks of virtues and precious things being lost."Come back", calls the poet, "Be what you once were again and don't leave me bereft and sad." A ovely piece well done cheers Cass
reply by the author on 07-Oct-2020
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This reads like the words from an ancient elven scroll. It is full of beautiful images and dreamy thoughts that beguile the senses. The lovely artwork suggests a dryad spirit casting her magic over the waterfall and anyone who comes close enough to be affected. She is a peaceful lady, full of love and hope who desires only to bring harmony to the world. The poem speaks of virtues and precious things being lost."Come back", calls the poet, "Be what you once were again and don't leave me bereft and sad." A ovely piece well done cheers Cass
Comment Written 07-Oct-2020
reply by the author on 07-Oct-2020
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Oh, wow - a woman who understands the fantasy heart!! Thank you so very much for this wonderful review, Cass, and for those awesome stars... both are so very appreciated and treasured!
Comment from Patty Palmer
That sounds like a pretty good spell you cast there! Oh, to get back the magical feeling of being a child. The things we took for granted I'd like to go back and relive some of those times again. Your spell sounds like an authentic spell! Great job!
Patty
reply by the author on 07-Oct-2020
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That sounds like a pretty good spell you cast there! Oh, to get back the magical feeling of being a child. The things we took for granted I'd like to go back and relive some of those times again. Your spell sounds like an authentic spell! Great job!
Patty
Comment Written 07-Oct-2020
reply by the author on 07-Oct-2020
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Wow! What a great review! Thank you so very much for your comments!
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You're welcome!
Patty
Comment from Elizabeth Emerald
Startling magical imagery throughout--elven, dwarven--unusual words aptly used! This is a delightful flight of fairyland whimsy! Good luck. Cheers. LIZ
reply by the author on 07-Oct-2020
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Startling magical imagery throughout--elven, dwarven--unusual words aptly used! This is a delightful flight of fairyland whimsy! Good luck. Cheers. LIZ
Comment Written 07-Oct-2020
reply by the author on 07-Oct-2020
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Thank you so very much for your wonderful comments!
