I Cast My Spell...
Oh, to rediscover that which was lost!33 total reviews
Comment from Bill Pinder
Excellent poem that is written in this unique form. You have done a great job of weaving your creativity with imagination and playful images. Thanks for sharing and keep writing. Bill
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Excellent poem that is written in this unique form. You have done a great job of weaving your creativity with imagination and playful images. Thanks for sharing and keep writing. Bill
Comment Written 08-Oct-2020
reply by the author on 08-Oct-2020
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Thank you so very much for your review.
Comment from royowen
I think you've captured the essence of this style of poetry, that gives that ratatat quality to it. The ability to share many memories, a natural haven for a stream of consciousness like none other. This is a most articulate version of it, thank you and blessings, Roy
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I think you've captured the essence of this style of poetry, that gives that ratatat quality to it. The ability to share many memories, a natural haven for a stream of consciousness like none other. This is a most articulate version of it, thank you and blessings, Roy
Comment Written 08-Oct-2020
reply by the author on 08-Oct-2020
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Thank you so very much for your review!
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Pleasure
Comment from CrystieCookie999
This poem has a definite tone of longing for once was perhaps more time in youth for fantasy-filled dreams of elven magic and fairy dust instead of modern day, "grown-up" drudge. Nice share, since we all need time to dream.
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This poem has a definite tone of longing for once was perhaps more time in youth for fantasy-filled dreams of elven magic and fairy dust instead of modern day, "grown-up" drudge. Nice share, since we all need time to dream.
Comment Written 08-Oct-2020
reply by the author on 08-Oct-2020
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Thank you very much for your review.
Comment from Miss Cookie Atkinson
I love the artwork you choose to go with your poem, they are a perfect match
you captured my attention from the first line to the last. that is a pretty mermaid, to bad it's only in your dreams.
Cookie
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I love the artwork you choose to go with your poem, they are a perfect match
you captured my attention from the first line to the last. that is a pretty mermaid, to bad it's only in your dreams.
Cookie
Comment Written 08-Oct-2020
reply by the author on 08-Oct-2020
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Thank you so much for your review.
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It was my pleasure.
Cookie
Comment from Jeffrey Mitchell
Dream land, the picture is very nice, and so is your poem. My thoughts are on shild hood dreams. Memories of wanting to go back to sleep to finish my dream, when in reality I didn't want to live in reality. Thank you for sharing
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Dream land, the picture is very nice, and so is your poem. My thoughts are on shild hood dreams. Memories of wanting to go back to sleep to finish my dream, when in reality I didn't want to live in reality. Thank you for sharing
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Comment Written 08-Oct-2020
reply by the author on 08-Oct-2020
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Now, to that, I can relate! Thank you so much for your review.
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Your welcome
Comment from Saria/Shreyamsi
A really nice poem! I genuinely enjoyed reading it....also, your picture is breathtaking and I enjoyed your idea too...your presentation is also good and you meet all rules required for the contest...so, well done! Best of luck!
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A really nice poem! I genuinely enjoyed reading it....also, your picture is breathtaking and I enjoyed your idea too...your presentation is also good and you meet all rules required for the contest...so, well done! Best of luck!
Comment Written 08-Oct-2020
reply by the author on 08-Oct-2020
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Thank you so much for your review.
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Welcome!
Comment from Raul1
This poem meets the requirements for the contest. It has a very good chance of winning the contest. Excellent work! No grammatical errors. Well written. Good luck in the contest!
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This poem meets the requirements for the contest. It has a very good chance of winning the contest. Excellent work! No grammatical errors. Well written. Good luck in the contest!
Comment Written 07-Oct-2020
reply by the author on 08-Oct-2020
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Thank you for your review.
Comment from Boogienights
Very nicely done. I too long to lose myself in fantasy, get away from the politics and covid for awhile. I've been watching Lord of the rings lately, so that helps. Best of luck in the contest.
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Very nicely done. I too long to lose myself in fantasy, get away from the politics and covid for awhile. I've been watching Lord of the rings lately, so that helps. Best of luck in the contest.
Comment Written 07-Oct-2020
reply by the author on 08-Oct-2020
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Thank you so very much for your review.
Comment from harmony13
The author's words are descriptive, clear, interesting and creative.
I pondered on the theme of this poem. The artwork is colorful and
compliments the words of this poem well. The poem flows and connect
well. Hope you had a great day!
reply by the author on 07-Oct-2020
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The author's words are descriptive, clear, interesting and creative.
I pondered on the theme of this poem. The artwork is colorful and
compliments the words of this poem well. The poem flows and connect
well. Hope you had a great day!
Comment Written 07-Oct-2020
reply by the author on 07-Oct-2020
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Thank you very much for your review.
Comment from Alchera
Three magical and fabulous septenaries amazingly written and full of nostalgia taking the reader's mind within and along the poetess's childhood missed wonderland that now she can only feel and see again gather ed in a bliss of solitude dreaming through her childhood's epiphanies. (The child is the father of Man) Wordsworth. Chapeau poetess!
reply by the author on 09-Oct-2020
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Three magical and fabulous septenaries amazingly written and full of nostalgia taking the reader's mind within and along the poetess's childhood missed wonderland that now she can only feel and see again gather ed in a bliss of solitude dreaming through her childhood's epiphanies. (The child is the father of Man) Wordsworth. Chapeau poetess!
Comment Written 07-Oct-2020
reply by the author on 09-Oct-2020
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What an awesome review crowned with bright stars - thank you so much, Tony!! Hope you have a weekend just loaded with the magic of childhood! ;)
