I Cast My Spell...
Oh, to rediscover that which was lost!33 total reviews
Comment from Ben B.
This is a beautiful and majestic poem! The way you wrote it has made it both soothing and very relaxing. Shame this isn't an actual reality, this setting is a bliss.
reply by the author on 14-Oct-2020
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This is a beautiful and majestic poem! The way you wrote it has made it both soothing and very relaxing. Shame this isn't an actual reality, this setting is a bliss.
Comment Written 09-Oct-2020
reply by the author on 14-Oct-2020
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So glad you enjoyed my poetic jaunt into fantasy-land, sir! ;) Have a wonderful day out there! :) :)
Comment from thaities, Rebecca V.
I enjoyed this entry for the Trinet Poetry writing prompt. There is much said in your words. I hope this poem does well in the contest!
reply by the author on 09-Oct-2020
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I enjoyed this entry for the Trinet Poetry writing prompt. There is much said in your words. I hope this poem does well in the contest!
Comment Written 09-Oct-2020
reply by the author on 09-Oct-2020
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Thank you for your review.
Comment from roof35
You followed the rule and penned a lovely Trinet for the contest. Your illustration is also lovely and unique. It is well written with no errors. I especially like your two closing lines.
reply by the author on 09-Oct-2020
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You followed the rule and penned a lovely Trinet for the contest. Your illustration is also lovely and unique. It is well written with no errors. I especially like your two closing lines.
Comment Written 09-Oct-2020
reply by the author on 09-Oct-2020
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Thank you so very much!!
Comment from palmart
Many characters and names brought from Fairy Tales. Words with lots of emotional charge like "mermaid" "dragon" "Fairy's dust" "Neverland" that submerge reader into another kingdom, where everything is possible. You made a tour into imaginary worlds. Lovely poem!
Perfect choice for the picture! It depicts whatever can be imagined, like your writing!
reply by the author on 09-Oct-2020
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Many characters and names brought from Fairy Tales. Words with lots of emotional charge like "mermaid" "dragon" "Fairy's dust" "Neverland" that submerge reader into another kingdom, where everything is possible. You made a tour into imaginary worlds. Lovely poem!
Perfect choice for the picture! It depicts whatever can be imagined, like your writing!
Comment Written 09-Oct-2020
reply by the author on 09-Oct-2020
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Thank you so very much for such a wonderful and encouraging review!!
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You´re very welcome!! Have a great time!
Comment from Dorothy Farrell
Hello anon, what a beautiful trinet. Written true to form and each stanza is a great. Lovely closing finish - Endless dreamer, Ever youthful, Never old!
Your picture is gorgeous. Lovely overall piece of work. Good Luck - regards Dorothy x
reply by the author on 09-Oct-2020
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Hello anon, what a beautiful trinet. Written true to form and each stanza is a great. Lovely closing finish - Endless dreamer, Ever youthful, Never old!
Your picture is gorgeous. Lovely overall piece of work. Good Luck - regards Dorothy x
Comment Written 09-Oct-2020
reply by the author on 09-Oct-2020
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Thank you so very much for your review!
Comment from Susan Louise Gabriel
I love your poem! It's so dreamlike - and the artwork you chose is perfect for the poem's sentiment. I especially like the last few lines: "Perhaps I'll find it once again and my reward will be tenfold, Endless dreamer, Ever youthful, Never old!" You have expressed my sentiments exactly! LOL
Susan
reply by the author on 09-Oct-2020
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I love your poem! It's so dreamlike - and the artwork you chose is perfect for the poem's sentiment. I especially like the last few lines: "Perhaps I'll find it once again and my reward will be tenfold, Endless dreamer, Ever youthful, Never old!" You have expressed my sentiments exactly! LOL
Susan
Comment Written 09-Oct-2020
reply by the author on 09-Oct-2020
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Thank you so very much for your review!
Comment from Seshadri_Sreenivasan
I am not a poet.Nor have I been exposed to poetry of this kind. I find this very creative and expressive.
I am three days old on this site and I find many exciting things happening. No thanks to Lockdown I have started wrting stories.I am more into fine arts and have been a member of FanArt Review for the last 10years.
Good luck!
-Sesha
reply by the author on 09-Oct-2020
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I am not a poet.Nor have I been exposed to poetry of this kind. I find this very creative and expressive.
I am three days old on this site and I find many exciting things happening. No thanks to Lockdown I have started wrting stories.I am more into fine arts and have been a member of FanArt Review for the last 10years.
Good luck!
-Sesha
Comment Written 09-Oct-2020
reply by the author on 09-Oct-2020
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Thank you so very much for your review!
Comment from Margaret Bednar
Oh, the dreams of mystery and mermaid's grace, of fantasy and fairy dust! A dreamy poem that conjures Neverland and numerous fairytale and magical settings that young (and some old) still dream about! Sweet poem.
reply by the author on 08-Oct-2020
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Oh, the dreams of mystery and mermaid's grace, of fantasy and fairy dust! A dreamy poem that conjures Neverland and numerous fairytale and magical settings that young (and some old) still dream about! Sweet poem.
Comment Written 08-Oct-2020
reply by the author on 08-Oct-2020
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Thank you so very much for your review.
Comment from Gypsy Blue Rose
Hello anonymous
Beautiful entry for the
Trinet Poetry writing prompt contest. I never read a trinet poem before. It's a nice format.
I like the fantasy topic complete with dragons, fairies, mermaids, elves, griffins, and dwarves.
Good luck in the contest.
reply by the author on 08-Oct-2020
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Hello anonymous
Beautiful entry for the
Trinet Poetry writing prompt contest. I never read a trinet poem before. It's a nice format.
I like the fantasy topic complete with dragons, fairies, mermaids, elves, griffins, and dwarves.
Good luck in the contest.
Comment Written 08-Oct-2020
reply by the author on 08-Oct-2020
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Thank you so very much for your review.
Comment from angel123
Your Trinet poem is interesting and descriptive. It entertains like a movie and your artwork choice goes well with your message of a love spell. Best wishes!
reply by the author on 08-Oct-2020
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Your Trinet poem is interesting and descriptive. It entertains like a movie and your artwork choice goes well with your message of a love spell. Best wishes!
Comment Written 08-Oct-2020
reply by the author on 08-Oct-2020
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Thank you so much for your review.
