Insane
A human condition31 total reviews
Comment from Boogienights
A very interesting poem done well. The message, which is a call for all to chill out is awesome. This kind of poetry is not easy but you did it well, and I wish you luck in the contest.
reply by the author on 26-Mar-2021
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A very interesting poem done well. The message, which is a call for all to chill out is awesome. This kind of poetry is not easy but you did it well, and I wish you luck in the contest.
Comment Written 07-Oct-2020
reply by the author on 26-Mar-2021
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Thank you!
Comment from Raul1
A good way to calm some people down when they are having a bad day. It is humorous and hilarious. I liked reading your poem. Interesting. Thanks for sharing. Very good work!
reply by the author on 26-Mar-2021
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A good way to calm some people down when they are having a bad day. It is humorous and hilarious. I liked reading your poem. Interesting. Thanks for sharing. Very good work!
Comment Written 07-Oct-2020
reply by the author on 26-Mar-2021
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Thank you!
Comment from Louis A Gargiso
It seems to be dialogue rambled with a dry tone. Just nonsence but poetic nonsence.To capture the craziness an insane person must got through in there head. I think you captured the insane minds erratic flow. I like the line " mirror image is way worse then a mask" like hes so insane he cant even look himself in the mirror. I have a question.. in the dialogue back and forth is the insane person talking to himself, the priest the mirror and the devil.. and which one is starting the poem off in the first verse " could it be that the human race is mad"... I'm guessing it's the devil. But clear this up for me in a reply.. I really thaught this poem although not a rhyming poem was well put together and flowed nicely from verse to verse using last word first. it really got me thinking. Stay optimistic dont fall into insanities grasp.. peace be with you
reply by the author on 26-Mar-2021
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It seems to be dialogue rambled with a dry tone. Just nonsence but poetic nonsence.To capture the craziness an insane person must got through in there head. I think you captured the insane minds erratic flow. I like the line " mirror image is way worse then a mask" like hes so insane he cant even look himself in the mirror. I have a question.. in the dialogue back and forth is the insane person talking to himself, the priest the mirror and the devil.. and which one is starting the poem off in the first verse " could it be that the human race is mad"... I'm guessing it's the devil. But clear this up for me in a reply.. I really thaught this poem although not a rhyming poem was well put together and flowed nicely from verse to verse using last word first. it really got me thinking. Stay optimistic dont fall into insanities grasp.. peace be with you
Comment Written 07-Oct-2020
reply by the author on 26-Mar-2021
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Thank you!
Comment from Gypsy Blue Rose
Insane
by Lordinajamjar
Hello, my friend,
Interesting entry for the Loop Poetry Contest. I think it's about putting on the damn mask during a deadly pandemic. I don't understand people who refuse to do it. I like the loop poetic form. It works well with your topic poem. Good luck in the contest.
reply by the author on 26-Mar-2021
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Insane
by Lordinajamjar
Hello, my friend,
Interesting entry for the Loop Poetry Contest. I think it's about putting on the damn mask during a deadly pandemic. I don't understand people who refuse to do it. I like the loop poetic form. It works well with your topic poem. Good luck in the contest.
Comment Written 07-Oct-2020
reply by the author on 26-Mar-2021
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Thank you!
Comment from estory
There's an interesting interconnectivity of images in this poem, from line to line, moving our thoughts from one emotion to the next and filling out that complex story of life. One minute we are full of ambition, the next we are at each other's throats, then after that we are building something together and then tearing it down. estory
reply by the author on 26-Mar-2021
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There's an interesting interconnectivity of images in this poem, from line to line, moving our thoughts from one emotion to the next and filling out that complex story of life. One minute we are full of ambition, the next we are at each other's throats, then after that we are building something together and then tearing it down. estory
Comment Written 07-Oct-2020
reply by the author on 26-Mar-2021
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Thank you!
Comment from Miss Cookie Atkinson
I wish I had a star to give you
The artwork you choose is a perfect match fr your poem
You captured my attention from the first line to the last
This is what I call a food for thought poem
Thank you for sharing
Cookie
reply by the author on 26-Mar-2021
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I wish I had a star to give you
The artwork you choose is a perfect match fr your poem
You captured my attention from the first line to the last
This is what I call a food for thought poem
Thank you for sharing
Cookie
Comment Written 07-Oct-2020
reply by the author on 26-Mar-2021
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Thank you!
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Your very welcome,
Have a blessed day
Cookie
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Your very welcome,
Have a blessed day
Cookie
Comment from dragonpoet
This could be about anyone with a huge ego that won't think of others. It seems to be fitting for those who refuse to wear masks to protect themselves and others.
Good luck in the contest.
Keep writing and stay healthy
dp
reply by the author on 26-Mar-2021
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This could be about anyone with a huge ego that won't think of others. It seems to be fitting for those who refuse to wear masks to protect themselves and others.
Good luck in the contest.
Keep writing and stay healthy
dp
Comment Written 07-Oct-2020
reply by the author on 26-Mar-2021
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Thank you!
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Don't mention it.
Joan
Comment from Margaret Bednar
Haunted by what you can't do... love that. Psalms are not my favorite part of the bible - I don't know why. Maybe the offkey way they are often sung in church :P Interesting take on this subject.
reply by the author on 26-Mar-2021
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Haunted by what you can't do... love that. Psalms are not my favorite part of the bible - I don't know why. Maybe the offkey way they are often sung in church :P Interesting take on this subject.
Comment Written 07-Oct-2020
reply by the author on 26-Mar-2021
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Thank you!
Comment from Monica Chaddick
This was a very well written piece of work. I especially liked the line where you say 'mirror image is way worse than a mask'. Best of luck with all of your writing endeavors.
reply by the author on 26-Mar-2021
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This was a very well written piece of work. I especially liked the line where you say 'mirror image is way worse than a mask'. Best of luck with all of your writing endeavors.
Comment Written 07-Oct-2020
reply by the author on 26-Mar-2021
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Thank you!
Comment from Sandra du Plessis
A Very well-written loop poem about the world events for the past six months are certainly driving most of us insane. We have our lives dirt of in a loop that never seems to find an end.
reply by the author on 26-Mar-2021
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A Very well-written loop poem about the world events for the past six months are certainly driving most of us insane. We have our lives dirt of in a loop that never seems to find an end.
Comment Written 07-Oct-2020
reply by the author on 26-Mar-2021
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Thank you!
