Comment from Joan E.

Excellent

Thank you for adding to the Renga collection and finding a mathing, golden pjcture. I enjoyed your use of alliteration to intensify your couplet. Smiles- Joan

 Comment Written 10-Oct-2020

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reply by the author on 11-Oct-2020

Thank you so much, Joan. I really appreciate your nice review.

Comment from Y. M. Roger

Excellent

Well, between your words and your wonderful verse, I had to just step out on the porch and soak in some sun!! ;) A lovely addition to the book here, Lisa -- thanx so much for sharing the warmth of your pen and thanx for joining the renga fun!! ;) Yvette

 Comment Written 07-Oct-2020

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reply by the author on 07-Oct-2020

Thank you so much. It is nice and sunny here as well.

Comment from Gypsy Blue Rose

Excellent

Life is Golden
by Lisa Wharton


Hello, Lisa,

Beautiful entry for the renga book. You followed Yvette's 5/7/5 poem very well. Thank you very much for adding a chapter to our renga book. I like the presentation too.

 Comment Written 06-Oct-2020

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reply by the author on 06-Oct-2020

Thank you very much for the nice review. I thought it was time to get away from the moon.

Comment from Ben B.

Excellent

This is good for the most part, but when the sun shines on your face there are thousands of ray lights coming down on you. Maybe you should try "rays light up" instead.

 Comment Written 06-Oct-2020

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reply by the author on 06-Oct-2020

Thanks