Renga Multi-Author Book
Viewing comments for Chapter 79 "For There is Only You"Renga is a Japanese linked poetry 5/7/5 and 7/7
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Comment from Joan E.
Thank you for your 5-7-5 contribution to the Renga book following the couplet. I relished your personification of "moonlight's" and wonderful reflection in the image. Cheers- Joan
reply by the author on 09-Oct-2020
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Thank you for your 5-7-5 contribution to the Renga book following the couplet. I relished your personification of "moonlight's" and wonderful reflection in the image. Cheers- Joan
Comment Written 07-Oct-2020
reply by the author on 09-Oct-2020
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Such lovely comments, Joan - I am honored. Thanx for stopping in on this shortie... I enjoy these for a 'breath of fresh air', ya know!! ;) :) Take care and may you have fabulous Friday!! ;) Yvette
Comment from Bill Schott
This 5-7-5, For There Is Only You. takes over the renga with this colossal moon and its equally intimidating reflection. The heavens and Earth are in its control.
reply by the author on 09-Oct-2020
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This 5-7-5, For There Is Only You. takes over the renga with this colossal moon and its equally intimidating reflection. The heavens and Earth are in its control.
Comment Written 06-Oct-2020
reply by the author on 09-Oct-2020
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Thanx for stopping in for this shortie, Bill! ;) :)
Comment from royowen
Beautifully written Yvette, a great renga follow on from Gypsy's renga series, and June's frequent additions to this renga series which is building to a record breaking conclusion, well done, blessings Roy
reply by the author on 09-Oct-2020
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Beautifully written Yvette, a great renga follow on from Gypsy's renga series, and June's frequent additions to this renga series which is building to a record breaking conclusion, well done, blessings Roy
Comment Written 06-Oct-2020
reply by the author on 09-Oct-2020
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Thanx for stopping in on this short one, Roy -- was glad to see you joined the renga fun yesterday! ;) Take care and may you have Fabulous Friday!! ;) Yvette
Comment from Stephen Force
Great offering, I am going to have to go back and check the previous chapter to get the full measure of this renga, but the picture and the verse are really poignant. Well done.
reply by the author on 07-Oct-2020
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Great offering, I am going to have to go back and check the previous chapter to get the full measure of this renga, but the picture and the verse are really poignant. Well done.
Comment Written 06-Oct-2020
reply by the author on 07-Oct-2020
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Hey, and after you check it out, you can contribute a chapter -- would love to see yours!! ;) :) Thanx for stopping in and have a Wednesday of wonderment, sir!! ;) Yvette
Comment from Gypsy Blue Rose
For There is Only You
by Y. M. Roger
Hello, Yvette,
Beautiful 5/7/5 to follow June's couplet...it fits well. Good syllable count and connection between lines. I love the presentation. A great addition to our book.
reply by the author on 07-Oct-2020
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For There is Only You
by Y. M. Roger
Hello, Yvette,
Beautiful 5/7/5 to follow June's couplet...it fits well. Good syllable count and connection between lines. I love the presentation. A great addition to our book.
Comment Written 06-Oct-2020
reply by the author on 07-Oct-2020
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Thanx so much, Gypsy, gonna try to remember to get myself back into a routine of contributing... fingers crossed!! ;) Take care and may you have Wednesday of wonderment!! ;) Yvette
Comment from Raffaelina Lowcock
What an original thing to say about the darkness surrounding the moon.
"moonlight's dance partner" and the gorgeous picture that accompanies these words will set the presentation apart from all others. It is perfect.
Ralf
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What an original thing to say about the darkness surrounding the moon.
"moonlight's dance partner" and the gorgeous picture that accompanies these words will set the presentation apart from all others. It is perfect.
Ralf
Comment Written 06-Oct-2020
reply by the author on 07-Oct-2020
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Such lovely comments, Ralf, and those bright stars: I am honored, my lady!! ;) :) Thanx so much for stopping by for some 'Dancing in the Dark'... I enjoy these shorties for a 'breath of fresh air', ya know!! ;) :) Take care and may you have Wednesday of wonderment out there!! ;) Yvette
Comment from CrystieCookie999
Very nice sense of sound in this. I found the 'ar' sound repeated with darkness after larger. There was short 'e' assonance in 'essence echoes.' And there was suggested personification with 'dance partner.' Fun read today, thank you.
reply by the author on 07-Oct-2020
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Very nice sense of sound in this. I found the 'ar' sound repeated with darkness after larger. There was short 'e' assonance in 'essence echoes.' And there was suggested personification with 'dance partner.' Fun read today, thank you.
Comment Written 06-Oct-2020
reply by the author on 07-Oct-2020
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You are so welcome!! ;) And such awesome comments, Crystie, thank you!! ;) :) Thanx for stopping by, my lady, and take care! Here's sending wishes for a Wednesday of wonderment!! ;) Yvette
Comment from Susan Larson
What a beautiful image of the moon being the night time sky's dance partner. Sort of a little yin and yang worked in as well. Gorgeous picture to complement your beautiful words.
reply by the author on 07-Oct-2020
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What a beautiful image of the moon being the night time sky's dance partner. Sort of a little yin and yang worked in as well. Gorgeous picture to complement your beautiful words.
Comment Written 06-Oct-2020
reply by the author on 07-Oct-2020
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Such awesome comments, Susan, thank you (so glad you're back!)!! ;) :) Thanx for stopping by, my lady, and take care! Here's sending wishes for a Wednesday of wonderment!! ;) Yvette
Comment from aryr
What a wonderful picture Yvette, it truly enhanced the words you wrote. You did indeed capture the moment of the moon, the lake, the mountains, the reflection. Great job.
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What a wonderful picture Yvette, it truly enhanced the words you wrote. You did indeed capture the moment of the moon, the lake, the mountains, the reflection. Great job.
Comment Written 06-Oct-2020
reply by the author on 07-Oct-2020
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Such awesome comments, Alie, thank you!! ;) :) Thanx for stopping by, my lady, and take care! Here's sending wishes for a Wednesday of wonderment!! ;) Yvette
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You are so welcome Yvette, mmm hugging the wonderment of Wednesday. You have an awesome Wednesday as well.
Comment from Mark D. R.
Yvette,
I like how each post extends this book of renga. Sometimes they create a complete juxtaposition, which adds to the 'story.'
Of course, I favor your 5-7-5 form (-; You chose a most engaging photo and a good color pattern for your contribution.
Mark
reply by the author on 07-Oct-2020
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Yvette,
I like how each post extends this book of renga. Sometimes they create a complete juxtaposition, which adds to the 'story.'
Of course, I favor your 5-7-5 form (-; You chose a most engaging photo and a good color pattern for your contribution.
Mark
Comment Written 06-Oct-2020
reply by the author on 07-Oct-2020
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Of course (wink, wink)! ;) :) Thanx for stopping in on this short one, Mark -- always good to hear from you, sir! ;) Take care and may you have Wednesday of wonderment!! ;) Yvette