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Melodious Transition

Let the breezes and the colors move you!

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Comment from Gypsy Blue Rose
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Hello anonymous

Good entry for the Write a Nature 5-7-5 writing prompt contest. Good syllable count and connection between lines. The presentation is nice. I like the autumn season.


 Comment Written 05-Oct-2020

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Comment from Mia Twysted
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You make the change of seasons seem like a song that is changing its tempo. One song fades away as another one begins to get louder. I felt smooth and easy with this piece.

 Comment Written 05-Oct-2020

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Comment from Sandra du Plessis
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A very well-written poem about summer that starts to fade, and cooker autumn breezes sing their vibrant verse and announce winter is coming soon.

 Comment Written 05-Oct-2020

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Comment from Sharon Haiste
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I think this is a good entry for the Write a Nature 5-7-5 writing prompt.
This lovely piece is well matched by the artwork.
Well done and I wish you good luck with the contest.
Sharon

 Comment Written 05-Oct-2020

reply by the author on 06-Oct-2020
    Thanx so much for stopping in on this shortie, Sharon -- always good to hear from you, my lady! ;) Take care! ;) Yvette
Comment from Faith the Border collie
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Beautiful words which enhance the image in such a clever way. Thank you for sharing this incredible work.
This bring so much life and I can really picture what is happening, well done.

 Comment Written 05-Oct-2020

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Comment from Pearl Edwards
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I love this artwork from comfortcards it really depicts the autumn leaves blowing and your 5-7-5 poem bids a farewell to summer a welcome to colourful Autumn. Good luck in the contest.
cheers.

 Comment Written 05-Oct-2020

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Comment from thaities, Rebecca V.
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This is a lovely entry for the 5-7-5 haiku writing prompt. Good poetry is a natural gift that has been perfected such as this writing. Good luck in the contest!

 Comment Written 05-Oct-2020

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Comment from equestrik
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This is a nice write for the Write a Nature 5-7-5 prompt. I like the picture as well and I think it is really appropriate for the Autumn season. Best of luck.

 Comment Written 04-Oct-2020

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Comment from Shirley McLain
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A beautiful poem about autumn. It was smooth to read and was easy to understand. I loved the bright colors of your presentation. You did a great job. Shirley

 Comment Written 04-Oct-2020

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Comment from RodG
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I like how you describe the transition of seasons as being like a change in melody. Indeed one feels the "cool[er] notes" of Autumn and their vibrancy. Rod

 Comment Written 04-Oct-2020

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