"Flowered Dreams"
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Comment from Ben B.
Poor Fred, looks like the guy didn't even stand a chance. Love how you wrote this story baseball style. Everybody here's hit through the view of the sportscaster so why shouldn't we?
reply by the author on 13-Oct-2020
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Poor Fred, looks like the guy didn't even stand a chance. Love how you wrote this story baseball style. Everybody here's hit through the view of the sportscaster so why shouldn't we?
Comment Written 11-Oct-2020
reply by the author on 13-Oct-2020
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Thank you very much Ben have a pleasant week!
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Comment from Iza Deleanu
I think you forgot to post the rest of the chapter, or was this intentionally. Thank you for sharing and good luck with your writings and the next chapter.
reply by the author on 03-Oct-2020
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I think you forgot to post the rest of the chapter, or was this intentionally. Thank you for sharing and good luck with your writings and the next chapter.
Comment Written 03-Oct-2020
reply by the author on 03-Oct-2020
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Yes I purposely put that in a continuation mode and thanks for reviewing.
Doctor Ricky 1024